The advantages and disadvantages of ever-increasing use of technology
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Technology
is an essential part of our society, and it most
likely will be even more important for our descendants.
There are many undeniable advantages of the increasing use and development of
technology, but there are also some disadvantages of such a rapid progress of
technology.
The
technological progress is beneficial to humanity for several reasons. Firstly,
at the medical level, technology helps to save countless lives and increase our
lifespan. We are able to accurately diagnose diseases, treat sicknesses that
used to be fatal, we perform incredibly complex surgeries, and we are able combat
viruses and bacteria. Secondly, the invention of computers, smartphones and the
Internet has made access to information and communication faster and easier. Information
is stored and organized on the Internet, where anyone can access it. With the
help of the Internet, people can broaden their mind, learn and educate
themselves. Technology has changed communication in an incredible way; it has connected
people all around the world. Thirdly, technology has improved our daily lives
and has made our existence more comfortable. The clothes we wear, the
house we live, the food we eat, the cars and planes we travel, the mobile phone
we carry, and so on are just some gifts of technology.
On the
other hand, the evolution of modern technology has disadvantages, and it can
affect our lives in a negative way. First of all, the development of weaponry and
the invention of weapons of mass destruction have put the humanity in grave danger.
These instruments of death can be turned not only upon the
aggressors, but also upon civilians seeking to exercise their freedoms of
speech and assembly. Secondly, the ecological situation is getting worse and
worse because of technology. The discharge of waste products into the
environment has increased drastically, and this causes pollution and diminishes
the quality of soil, water and air. There
is also depletion of natural resources. All of this affects our
planet, our health and it will definitely have a harmful impact on future
generations. Finally, we are too dependent on technology. We feel helpless if
any of our technological tools fail to perform, and we often trust our devices
to think for us. The social media affects our identity, it tells us who we are,
who our friends are, and what we are supposed to like (Lincoln , Kevin. “Where
Is the Boundary between Your Phone and Your Mind?” The Guardian, 9 Dec.
2018, https://bit.ly/2G8OIrI).
All in all, technology has improved our lives.
However, technology should be used with caution and only with the purpose to benefit
humanity.
I'm quite puzzled because I am sure I commented on your work but can't see my comment in the thread. Is the moderation option still ON, I wonder.
ОтветитьУдалитьNo, as I have just checked. Then I am sorry I don't know what happened. Let me comment on your draft again during the class we'll have on Tu (18.12.2018)
УдалитьNastya,
Удалитьthink about a more interesting way to start and finish your essay:
a) http://grissomsgrammar.blogspot.com/2008/01/eight-introduction-techniques-that-hook.html
b) https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/conclusions/ This is a very useful resource, so it'd be great if you studiedit.
For N.Yu.: consider how to go about the situation when the essay is written after the student surfed the web and picked up some idea which are later used in the essay without attribution. On the one hand, it's clearly the case of plagiarism, so how to deal with it.
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